Za-man
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« on: August 03, 2009, 07:08:38 am » |
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Hello everyone,
Za-Man here and I wanted to talk to you about my poems and how I got the inspiration to write them.
The poem I will be talking about today is "Perfect Date". The reason I wrote this poem is because one day my brother and I were standing in a line and this girl a few feet behind us was talking to her dad and she was crying. My brother explained to me that when he walked by to catch up to me, He heard her talking about her boyfriend and how he left her. I was kinda of shocked by what he told me. Then I began to think teenage guys today do not really care about feelings and how girls react to certain things. So that night I keep thinking about what my brother had told me. I prayed to God that night and asked Him to help me write a poem that speaks out to teens and the "love" they go through. The next morning I sat there and I wrote "Perfect Date" and I thanked God for His help.
Here is the poem
Perfect Date
It started with a smile and a simple hi Then you thought to yourself this could be the guy The sun was bright, the grass was green, and the sky was blue Then you heard him say I like you
A week goes by and you think that everything is still the same The sky was still blue and you didn’t want that to change You got a call and your sky wasn’t so blue Your heart stopped when you heard him say he was over you
It wasn’t your time, the time wasn’t right To pledge yourself to someone tonight But God is here for you and for Him you never have to wait Just believe in time God will give you your perfect date
God has someone special for you so don’t turn away Just like snow white your prince will come someday So don’t be searching for the one for you Because in time God will lead him straight to you
God knows the pain you feel inside and it won't last forever If you put you faith in God He will make it all better So don’t worry about love because your only a teen In time as you grow older God will show you what love means
Soon it will be your time and the time will be right Thanks to God you never loss sight And because you listened to Him and you stop to wait He will give you your perfect date
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JJ
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« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2009, 07:13:38 am » |
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Great poem ZA-MAN
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Kmcnfl
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« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2009, 08:22:25 am » |
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Great Job! Always listen to the Lord!
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cometsweep32
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« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2009, 08:39:14 am » |
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Wow! Awesome poem! Thanks so much for sharing.
your sister in Christ, Christie
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DaRvrnd
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« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 09:50:23 am » |
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Good one, z! You should put it on the teen's board as well! Very nice!
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Za-man
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« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2009, 12:56:58 pm » |
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Thank You Everyone
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JJ
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« Reply #6 on: August 03, 2009, 08:31:24 pm » |
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No Problem!
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Tara5684
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« Reply #7 on: August 04, 2009, 12:26:03 am » |
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Very good poem. I really enjoyed it. Your Sister In Christ Tara
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He alone is my rock and my savation, He is my fortress, I will never be shaken. (Psalms 62:2 NIV) Tara Foster
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